Monthly Archives: February 2009

Galaxion

A couple weeks back, I commented on the dearth of good science fiction webcomics. To be honest, this lack extends to more than just webcomics; if you go into any major chain bookstore, you’ll find plenty of fantasy and dark romance parading around in fantasy clothing, but only a handful of science fiction novels. While part of this lies with the business model of these bookstores (which run under the belief that unless something is by a hot writer, it won’t sell once it’s two years old), part of the problem lies with the difficulty in writing believable science fiction.

Writers never knows when fans might know more than they do on a given subject. Thus when authors indulges in technobabble to explain away a plot point or background setting, they never know when the fans are going to throw physics back in their face. Rather than cope with the need to research scientific principles and achieve a basic understanding, most authors avoid it altogether. Fortunately, the cartoonist for the webcomic Galaxion found another method: avoid talking about the science behind the story.

The result is a comic that focuses on the characters and plot, and keeps the science fiction as a background element. Indeed, one of the great benefits of webcomics (in the hands of even a proficient artist) is their graphic nature; the artist can show the scene rather than explain it, and allow the readers to fill in the blanks with their own knowledge (if they so choose).And while this old science fiction aficianado might notice small flaws in the comic, and other aspects that should be developed further, Galaxion avoids many of the pitfalls that have infected other science fiction comics.

If anything, Galaxion manages to hide too much of its background. Take the Myradi; this enigmatic term has appeared several times, without explanation on if they are a political group, a corporation, or even an alien species. (By reading through the notes under the comic, I was finally able to confirm that they are aliens; the only sentient aliens that humanity has discovered at this point in the comic’s timeline.) Another element that could have been explained a bit further is why the group is testing a Faster-Than-Light propulsion system; initially I was left thinking that humanity only had sub-light propulsion for its starships.

These are small flaws that probably don’t matter to readers who aren’t conversant in physics or are big science fiction fans. Nor does it detract from the primary focus of the comic: the characters. In this, Tara Tallan has done a superb job; the cast is varied and have a viable chemistry that is fun to watch. (Indeed, the banner for the comic reads “Galaxion: Life. Love. Hyperspace.” Not that this is a teen romance or the like, though there are some fun moments where we get to watch one of the main characters get clubbed upside the head by the charm and good nature of another of the cast.)

One interesting thing about Galaxion is that the comic is actually a relaunch from an older version. While I never read Galaxion when it was at Girlamatic, due to my dislike of the subscription-based model it was working off of (and the fact I’m cheap and don’t want to spend money on comics I’m not sure I’ll enjoy), the occasional notes under the comic mention the previous work several times. Undoubtedly, Tallan took the core elements of previous incarnations of Galaxion and focused primarily on them, to create a more streamline and effective comic.

This approach works. Extraneous elements are touched upon and then stored in their own section, allowing first-time readers to go straight through the comic’s primary storyline. Little prequel stories and fun side-stories will appear from time to time (with Tallan apparently using tangentially-related material as fillers when she has to go on hiatus), but avoid disrupting the flow of the comic for first-time readers. The result is a comic that isn’t too brainy for the average fan, but hasn’t been dumbed down either, and is definitely worth reading.

Alone in a Crowd

One of the truisms of the critiquing business is that negative reviews are an important part of reviews, if only to warn people away from movies, books, and the like that don’t work. It’s not an aspect of reviewing I utilize very often, partly because I’m a fairly tolerant reader who can often find something worthwhile about the comics I read, and partly because if a comic doesn’t have something worthwhile in it, I seldom want to waste my time reading through it. However, there are times when reviewers have to pick up that sledgehammer and lay into strips that are intrinsically flawed.

Alone in a Crowd is one of those strips. The problem is that cartoonist Thomas Szewc doesn’t seem to know what sort of comic he’s writing. I mean, it starts out as a childhood friendship comic, with a short blonde ditz named Hope who pays the local bully to let her talk to him (no doubt because her insanity and inanity drives anyone who isn’t being paid away). When she meets another girl, Faith, who for some bizarre reason has kitty ears (described as, and I kid you not, a birth defect) (I mean, why not go the whole 90 yards and have it be the unfortunate result of the kid getting her head caught in a mechanical… rice picker?) and who (despite her better judgment) ends up introducing Hope to her guardian, Sara.

So far we’ve got all the ingredients for the sort of comic that would force diabetics to take insulin injections and probably inflict cavities on the rest of us. I’ve run into this sort of comic before, and properly done they’re the sort of thing that drives some people into fits, and gives others the warm fuzzies. So when we’re introduced to Faith’s aunt, Desirae Passions, and given a multi-page explanation of her history as a porn star before she started up her own pornography studio to create porn that didn’t treat its stars as objects… yes, you heard me right. Partway into the story, we learn that the kitty-eared kid’s aunt is a porn star, and on how she was abused by the people who hired her.

This is what I call a (and please excuse my language here) “what the fuck” moment. I can just see some parent reading through the first dozen comics and going “ah, a kid comic!” and letting little Sally start to read it. The parent doesn’t want to suffer from added cavities, and is probably being careful to try and avoid Type 2 Diabetes here, so it’s perhaps understandable that she didn’t read all the way through. So imagine her surprise when little Sally comes out, looking puzzled, and asks “what’s a porn star?” (Or worse, gets a phonecall from her daughter’s school because the kid didn’t ask Mommy but went to her teacher instead.)

The comic even comments on this, with Faith and Hope being sent to Faith’s bedroom while the rest of us are tortured with this poorly-imagined sob story. And there, Hope comes up with one of her brief moments of lucidity by suggesting that maybe Faith’s sister and aunt are talking about things too old for them. And then we’re brought back to the tradition of lunacy by Hope saying “Or… maybe she’s plotting to overthrow the President and doesn’t want you involved as an accomplice!” I swear, this girl is Pinky and the Brain, combined.

Okay. The comic has artwork that doesn’t make you want to gouge out your eyeballs. And either story alone would work; Desirae’s little story and the object lesson of always reading the contract is an important one… and while in some places nauseating, the childhood friendship and two loners coming together could be a worthwhile comic. But this is one instance where you don’t mix the two. This comic is not child-safe. Nor is it really something most adults would indulge in for a long period of time. It takes elements that could work alone, but which together becomes unworkable.

Think of it as like magnesium and water. Both have their place and their value. But if you mix the two, you get an explosion. If Szewc were to relaunch the comic and either removed the Desirae storyline or eliminated the Faith/Hope aspect… perhaps even with the focus of the comic on Sara, an older sister-turned-single mom, then it might be worth reading. But as it is now? I strongly recommend against this comic.

Call for Guest Art for The Wotch

It seems that Anne Onymous, the pseudonymed artist for the webcomic The Wotch fell and dislocated her right elbow, which kind of puts her comic on an involuntary hiatus for a bit. I figure it might be a nice gesture if some of the more artistically-skilled among us (well, my readers that is, because trust me, I’m not artistically-skilled!) might send some guest-art her way so she can put updates up while waiting to heal.

Considering Anne herself is probably in a bit of pain and might not be checking her e-mail regularly, you might want to contact her colorist and friend, Robin, at the e-mail address: robin at thewotch dot com (or you could go onto her forums and contact Thom or another administrator at her forums).

Webcomic Commentary: Karen Ellis, Planet Karen

I’ve just learned that one of my favorite cartoonists, Karen Ellis (the creative mind behind Planet Karen), lost her apartment to a fire last night. She doesn’t know how extensive the damage is to her own apartment, but the apartment above hers is (in her words) “toast” so I suspect she may have lost belongings and probably her computer and means of updating her comic.

While she’s not put out a request for donations and times are tough for many of us, it might be a nice gesture for people who can spare money to send some her way. Donations to Karen’s Paypal account can be made from the donation link on her main page; I tried linking it directly but the link from my system started giving errors for some reason.

Fortunately, Karen seems to be unhurt (or at least didn’t mention anything about injuries) and made it out safely.

Addendum: Karen just updated her comic (using other computers to get her update up) mentioning what happened. As I said before, Karen is safe. However, she was fortunate; her upstairs neighbor died in the blaze. I’ve been through a couple fire alarms in my own apartment. Both were false alarms (though with one the hallways were full of smoke; someone apparently really burned their dinner or something). It’s easy to start ignoring these alarms and think “it’s another false alarm.” The problem is… if you do that, the one time it’s not a false alarm, you could get hurt or worse.

Karen’s apartment is pretty trashed, and she’s not going to be able to stay there. I don’t know how damaged her belongings are, but I suspect any donations would be useful in helping her find a new place to stay and to replace any damaged or lost items.

El Goonish Shive

It’s been some time since I last reviewed El Goonish Shive. Part of it has to do with the direction the story was taking; I have less-than-pleasant memories of my high school years, and watching the persecution Susan was going through for sticking up for her beliefs was not enjoyable. Another part of it had to do with the increasingly erratic update schedule. Much like I’d warned in my article The Cost of Complexity, EGS’s update schedule became a hit-or-miss affair.

Entire months would go by without an update, and after putting EGS in my “on hiatus” folder, I proceeded to forget about the strip. However, every couple of months I’ll go through the hiatus folder to see if anyone’s updated (or if the strips I accidentally put there rather than the “read when it’s more interesting” folder have gotten more interesting). I took a glance at EGS, saw it was updating again, and started skimming through the comic backward. I was five updates in when I was slapped in the face with a color comic, and realized that Dan Shive had gone back to black and white.

To be honest, I was never very partial to the colored EGS strips. There is a certain beauty to greyscale that is in many ways superior to color. Many of the complexities of shading and highlights you find in the most lovingly colored comics can appear in a greyscale comic, and result in a product that is often superior to the colored strips. The odd thing is, greyscale actually takes as much time to “color” as a normal color strip, which is why a number of greyscale comics eventually shift to color.

Black and white comics can also contain a surprising level of complexity in them. Comics like Nukees and Narbonic have remained black and white for years. Indeed, the latest black and white updates for EGS show a level of detail that was hidden or lacking in the colored comics. While EGS still has some flat “spot greyscale” for incidental shading (perhaps reminiscent of the spot color found in black and white strips like Dead Winter and Sluggy Freelance), the comic retains a certain purity of form with the new format.

Indeed, the lack of color helps focus the reader’s attention on the comic itself. This can be challenging for writers, as they have to rely more on the cast and story rather than fancy-looking artwork. Fortunately, Shive has a strong and likeable cast that have come to life and seized the comic’s reins to tell their own story on more than one occasion. The sheer size of El Goonish Shive’s archives may frighten off some readers, but the comic is an enjoyable read that often maintains an effective mixture of drama and humor. With the large number of comics that forget their comedic roots as they pursue dramatic storylines, it’s refreshing to see one that stays true to its roots.

Webcomic Link Information

Every so often over at Tangents’ Livejournal backup site I’ll post the URLs of various comics I regularly read. Not all of them have been reviewed (to be honest, sometimes it can be damn difficult to write up a webcomic review, especially if the comic hasn’t done something recently to inspire a review), and I do keep finding new comics to review that aren’t on the list, so don’t worry if your favorite comic isn’t here; I’ll undoubtedly find it eventually. Though again, inspiration often needs to hit before the review gets written.

I’ll likely edit the list a couple times before I’m done, so consider this a list-in-progress. And yes, I do read this many webcomics; over eighty on Mondays alone. The list is divided into categories depending on how many times a week the comic updates and when it updates, and also includes lists of comics that I’ve stopped reading (for now), those I intend to get to eventually, and so on.

Daily Comics

 
Weekday Comics

 
Monday/Wednesday/Friday Comics

 
Tuesday/Thursday/Saturday Comics (Most of these comics don’t update on Saturday but I didn’t want to subdivide the records even further)

 
Monday/Thursday Comics

 
Tuesday/Friday Comics

 
Monday Comics

 
Tuesday Comics

 
Wednesday Comics

 
Thursday Comics

 
Friday Comics

 
Weekend Comics

 
Intermittent Comics, updates several times a week

 
Intermittent Comics, updates several times a month (if we’re lucky)

 
Comics I check monthly

 
Comics on Hiatus last I checked (Please note, this list needs editing as some comics are on it that I just stopped reading (reader hiatus rather than author hiatus) and I’ll be getting back to the list later today)

 
Comics on my To-Read List

 
Ended Comics

 
The Dead Pool (or comics I stopped reading and don’t intend to restart anytime soon)

Crimson Dark

There is a dearth of good science fiction comics out there. Part of the problem lies with the genre itself; in order to effectively write science fiction, the writer needs some knowledge of physics and chemistry. Without that knowledge, armchair physicists will tear holes into the story and gripe about little discrepancies, much like I did when reviewing another scifi comic last year. So it was with some trepidation that I started reading Crimson Dark, by David C. Simon. I’ll admit that my unhappiness with the majority of recent science fiction was only part of the reason I had avoided CD; the other reason is that Simon uses the 3D Rendering program Poser to help create the comic.

Unlike a number of other Poser comics, CD doesn’t use Poser to create the end-product. Because of this, the comic manages to avoid the worse aspects of uncanny valley territory, where the artwork is close enough to reality for people to lose some suspension of disbelief, but off just enough to trigger feelings of revulsion because of the alien or other aspect of the artwork. Instead, Poser is a tool used to create the line-art for the comic, which Simon will then color using more traditional means. The end-result is not perfect, mind you. Small things such as articulated teeth (very rarely seen in drawn comics) occasionally push the comic into the uncanny valley, along with some coloring choices. But the end result is still far more effective than most comics that rely entirely on Poser for the end product.

This allows Simon to focus more on the story. In this, Simon has created an excellent setting that is reminiscent of the television program Firefly, at least so far as the cast dynamic is concerned. The comic follows the privateer vessel Niobe, which is involved in a larger conflict between two stellar governments, and which rescues ace fighter-pilot Kari Tyrell after she’s involved in an ambush against her patrol. While Kari is initially reluctant to work with the privateers, events eventually force her to join with the crew of the Niobe.

However, it is the cast that sells the story here. The characters are interesting, complex, and in a refreshing change from far too many comics, aren’t complete idiots. Perhaps part of this is the Firefly feel to the comic that helps sell these characters. Nor are these characters clones from the television show (though Hal, the ship’s engineer, seems almost like Jayne’s twin brother, though I might be seeing too much into the characterization there). Fortunately, other characters in the comic likewise are smarter than the generic antagonist and actually think things through. It’s a refreshing change from far too many comics where hero and villain often collectively have less intelligence than a squirrel living in a mercury refinery.

Crimson Dark manages to create an effective mix of scifi elements, plot, and character development. While considerable work goes into the computer-generated elements of the artwork, the comic doesn’t rely on the computer art to distract people from ineffectual storytelling or two-dimensional characters. Instead, CD is one of those rarities among scifi comics in having an effective story with realistic scientific elements. Add in fairly effective art that avoids the worse effects that many Poser-assisted comics succumb to, and you end up with a rarity among science fiction webcomics: an intelligently-written comic with art that isn’t anime and doesn’t make you want to claw your eyes out. For these points alone, I have to recommend it for any science fiction fan.