http://www.tangents.us/2009/08/14/saijiki-stories/ Webcomic Reviews, Rants, Stories, and more Tue, 20 Jul 2010 13:17:42 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://www.tangents.us/2009/08/14/saijiki-stories/comment-page-1/#comment-147 Ineluki Sat, 15 Aug 2009 19:04:42 +0000 http://www.tangents.us/?p=1181#comment-147 ugh. Just read Autumnside and I think this really isn't for me. For one, the story can't seem to decide on a setting and mood. Jurrasic Park references in a dark age style fairy tale? The whole story seemed as not convoluted enough. As simple as being a tale for children, to be precise. And some logic error that I really couldn't oversee as much as I liked (pumpkin men talking about pumpkin smell). Hopefully the cartoonist well get a better grip on such things with practice, but even then, the stories seem too simple for me, and the funny details (why crows are black) too sparse to make it seem worthwhile. ugh. Just read Autumnside and I think this really isn’t for me. For one, the story can’t seem to decide on a setting and mood. Jurrasic Park references in a dark age style fairy tale?
The whole story seemed as not convoluted enough. As simple as being a tale for children, to be precise.
And some logic error that I really couldn’t oversee as much as I liked (pumpkin men talking about pumpkin smell).
Hopefully the cartoonist well get a better grip on such things with practice, but even then, the stories seem too simple for me, and the funny details (why crows are black) too sparse to make it seem worthwhile.

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