Monthly Archives: April 2012

xkcd

While not all of the updates for the sarcastic stick figure comic xkcd are hits, I must admit the latest update was delightfully sardonic, especially given my own opinions on the book “Atlas Shrugged.” There is a certain surreal humor in the thought that some building engineer designed a secret panel in a library specifically to hold a copy of Ann Rand’s classic “libertarian” novel “Atlas Shrugged” (which ignores the very important role that “ordinary” people play in a capitalistic society, along with the infrastructure that government provides for industry) just to diss the person’s taste in literature. No doubt there are plenty of Rand fans who’ll take umbrage at cartoonist Randall Munroe’s take on their favorite book, but to be honest, the title could easily have been changed to any book you dislike and it would have had similar merit.

Webcomic News – Erstwhile

Webcartoonists Gina Biggs (of Red String), Louisa Roy (of Velharthis), and Elle Skinner (of Missing Monday) have started up a crowdsourcing Kickstarter effort for their collaborative webcomic Erstwhile (which I’ve yet to review), which adapts lesser-known Grimm’s Fairy Tales to a graphic format. The stories are told as they originally appeared in Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm’s publications, rather than the watered-down versions that are doled out to children in today’s society. Currently the Kickstarter is at 17% of their initial goal, and is aiming for a goal of $9,750 to cover a print run of 1,000 comics.

Mysteries of the Arcana

It can be difficult effectively portraying background information in a story. Many attempts at presenting information dumps tend to fall flat on their face, especially when cast members should know the information being told (which is why so many fantasy stories involve “outsiders,” people isolated from the mainstream society, or from another world). In fact, information dumps are best handled in small amounts that portray the barest minimum of data necessary for readers to have a basic understanding of what’s going on.

Still, an inventive information dump can be useful, either acting as a foreshadowing device or even as a means of entertainment. One such example can be found in the latest update of the contemporary fantasy webcomic Mysteries of the Arcana with protagonists Chrys and Theresa commenting on the security of the Inn, which is some odd interdimensional waypoint between some 70-odd universes (including Earth). On the whole, it’s a pointless update (unless of course it is a foreshadowing device) and could have been skipped. The data itself is unnecessary, and the general feel of the update is that Theresa (the outsider) already knows this information.

What makes this information dump work is that final panel. Having Chrys lecturing Theresa would be boring and pointless. But having her talking to the security cameras because innkeeper Circe obsessively reviews the security footage is priceless. Even more amusing is the fact Chrys is leaving fingerprints on the damn camera lens when pointing it out to her friend. This doesn’t negate the fact this is boring and fairly pointless information. It could have been portrayed with a single panel when the data was needed. But by having it lampshaded by Chrys (who found the security lectures “boring”) is a good example on how humor can be used in information dumps, both to expand on needed knowledge, and to amuse the reader.

Go Get a Roomie!

Warning: The following comic is NSFW and contains nudity, sexually suggestive scenes, homosexuality, bisexuality, alternative lifestyles, lucid dreaming, and cake. Reader discretion is advised.

When I first started college back in the days when the Internet was text-based and webcomics were ASCII art, I met Jerri, a lady who was a bit of a free spirit. She had no problem taking a bath while I was visiting and having me sit in the bathroom while she washed up in a couple inches of water or talking to me about her sex-life. And while we were never intimate (even back then the Friendship Zone was strong in me), I must admit I gained a bit of an education on a way of life that was quite different than the fairly sheltered life I’d lived in suburbia. Since then I’ve met other free spirits, though none have been quite as open as Jerri was.

In many ways the main protagonist of Go Get a Roomie! is a combination of all those free spirits I’ve met over the years; webcartoonist Chloe has done a masterful job of creating a character who is both innocent and wicked, and manages to be likeable even as she sleeps her way from bed to bed (at least up until she runs into the other protagonist, Lillian). This isn’t to say Roomie (as everyone calls her) is some perfect Mary Sue; she seems to lack any sense of concept for “personal space,” tends to drink too much, and has accidently broken more than one heart (seeing she’s lesbian) from what I can tell. But her actions are out of a sense of mischief, not maliciousness. And to be honest, she’s done a lot of good for Lillian, our second protagonist.

If I were to wager a bet, I’d say that Lillian was added to the comic (after some thirty-odd updates) because Chloe wanted to expand the comic beyond drinking, flirting, and lesbian hijinks. In many ways I identify strongly with her; she tries hard to ignore Roomie’s sexual innuendoes and initially had a preference for solitude, wanting to just escape into her dreams rather than live life. Roomie’s presence and her insistence on dragging Lillian out of her shell have helped Lillian start to live life once more, and to broaden her horizons. Exposure to Roomie’s band of friends (each of who have let her sleep over at some time) has led Lillian to try and in her own words overcome her prejudices.

Interestingly, we’ve learned a lot more about Lillian and what led her to become introverted and to retreat from the world than we do of Roomie, who’s in just about every comic. I must admit I’d love to see Lillian draw out Roomie’s story; I doubt we’ll ever learn what Roomie’s name actually is (at least, not until the very last strip), but it might be interesting to see how she’s able to support herself, if she’s gone to college, and really what made her into the woman she is. Lillian’s story is fascinating and compelling… and has given Chloe a chance to expand her storytelling skills. I can’t help but hope she’s practicing with Lillian before tackling a more complex tale, and reveal what made Roomie into the free spirit she is.

Recent updates have actually taken a slightly darker tone, between Lillian’s confrontation with her brother’s fiancée (and her concerns that Evelyne will take Lillian’s brother away from her) and with Lillian’s use of lucid dreaming that has… started down the path toward nightmare; I must admit some curiosity as to if Roomie herself will have her exuberance and delightful sense of innocence shaded a bit, or if she’ll remain the contrast, a source of constant light within the story. While it would be nice to see Roomie’s character expanded upon, it is this blissful innocence that makes her a delight to watch, and a reason why I recommend this comic.

Atomic Laundromat

As any of my older readers can attest, one of my pet peeves is when a story refuses to advance a potential romantic situation out of fear of what many call “Moonlighting Syndrome,” where readers lose interest when the romantic tension between two characters ends when the characters finally get together. When you consider how tense relationships can be in the best of circumstances, Moonlighting Syndrome seems due more to poor writing than to a loss of romantic tension, especially as that tension can be switched to that of actually having a relationship. (Though as the saying goes, you write what you know. Which says something about Hollywood writers.)

So I have to applaud Armando Valenzuela for actually daring to let his primary protagonist in Atomic Laundromat have his chance without backing out. Mind you, he did toy with his readers by having Angela appear initially to reject David’s declaration of affections… and it would have made sense for her to do so (what with her attraction to superheroes and deep-seated need to be one herself). In fact, I almost think that it wasn’t until the fourth panel of today’s comic until she actually decided to take that leap of faith.

As I said above, just because a couple has started dating doesn’t mean that the tension between them will end. Given David’s opinions about superheroes and his thoughts as to why Angela wants to be one, and her own strong opinions on many topics, things aren’t going to go smoothly. I’d almost be willing to bet either David or Angela will end up empowered at some point, just to intensify the tension between them. But it’s better to see them take that chance, even with all that could go wrong. It’s more interesting this way. What’s more, it’s good storytelling.

Tangents: Year in Review

Looking back at last year, I have to say that many of the ideas I seem to espouse in my Year in Reviews tend to be much like a New Year’s Resolution: resolutions are made with every intention on keeping them… and then one by one they fall by the wayside. Fortunately, the biggest of my resolutions, maintaining a regular update schedule, was not one of those promises that I didn’t keep; while I did miss the occasional update now and again, 2011 was much more productive than the years before it. This isn’t to say I won’t be making more resolutions for 2012; it just means I intend on being more… conservative about them.

The thing I regret most is having failed to have posted another chapter of my original fiction “Stalking the Wolf” (of which I’ve only posted the prologue). Unfortunately, a combination of writer’s block and a lack of time has kept me from continuing the story; it took me months to hammer out one scene, and the next has proven equally ornery. The story isn’t dead, mind you, but I must admit some skepticism as to if I’ll be getting to it this year. I don’t want to repeat the mistakes of 2010 and posting the story before I’ve a sufficient buffer in place to allow for regular updates (even if that schedule is monthly). I suspect when I do have enough of the story on hand to start posting again, I’ll repost the prologue as well (as I’m fairly certain my readership cycles through readers regularly).

This isn’t to say that I won’t be posting any fiction this year; to be honest, I’ve been working on another novel of mine, “The Trip;” several excerpts of that novel can actually be found on this site as I tried working through a bad case of writer’s block. Fortunately, that block recently broke and I’ve been able to start work rewriting a couple dozen scenes in the novel. When I have enough of the novel rewritten and if I can work out the details with a couple of friends who volunteered to help, I might be posting the novel as an audiocast. Obviously there are several obstacles I’d need to overcome, so I have to admit this idea is closer to wishful thinking than written in stone.

As is obvious at this point, I’ve discontinued the interviews. On paper it was a good idea. In practice I ran into several problems, from finding webcartoonists interested in being interviewed (that I’d previously reviewed) to finding time to edit the reviews and post them on my site. The written format was also problematic in that it was less organic; given that in many cases I’d receive the interview a day or two before posting it, I didn’t have time to e-mail follow-up questions. Several people rightfully suggested the questions were overused and uninteresting. For now I’m going to shelve it as a learning experience. While I’d like to set up a monthly interview podcast, I need to do further research into podcasts before I set any plans in stone.

The Tangents Archive Project remains on hold, due to a lack of time. I’ve considered just posting the original reviews in an HTML shell that would provide basic links; if I do this, the Archive Site would lack images (or rather broken images as the original HTML code would link to a URL on Panel2panel that doesn’t exist any longer). I’m not sure if there’s really any interest in the Archives; it’s two years of reviews from five years ago. Admittedly, it is also a sizeable number of reviews, back when I was very productive (and not working regularly), but given that some of the comics don’t exist any longer and a number of URLs have changed, it will be out-of-date.

Seeing that Tangents’ readership has been fairly stagnant, I’ve been considering adding Project Wonderful advertising. This would actually serve two purposes. First, I could use any advertising revenues to purchase advertising and attract new readers. Second, I continue to get people requesting reviews from me (for some odd reason I still can’t comprehend; I’m willing to bet Websnark still gets more web traffic than I do, and it hasn’t updated in a year); allowing Project Wonderful advertising would give cartoonists another venue to attracting readers from Tangents outside of sending me an e-mail that often is read at work while on break and then forgotten.

One other thing I’ve thought of doing that is tangentially related to the webcomic reviews is posting weekly webcomics news. The news updates would be garnered through a combination of e-mail submissions (of which I already receive several press releases due to the odd believe by some professionals that Tangents is a media venue) and anything I pick up from blog entries that a number of webcartoonists include on their site. This would fill the hole in my Friday schedule, and wouldn’t be anything fancy; the totality of my journalistic skills consist of two semesters of journalism taken at a two-year college two decades ago, writing news articles for that college’s newspaper, and the interviews I posted last year. I’m a critic, not a reporter.

Also, while I am always welcome to guest reviews, I’ve come to realize I can’t rely on them for when I’m on vacation in October. Last year’s series of one-paragraph write-ups on weekly webcomics worked quite nicely; amazingly enough I was able to write all seven reviews in three days. Though I think I’ll start work on the weekly suggested reading before the last second this time around.

The fundamental core of Tangents works, and will remain the same. While my reviews have become a bit more critical in tone (especially for those webcartoonists I feel are sitting on their laurels and not working to their full potential – Dan Shive, I am looking at you, though you’re not alone in this) I will continue to show respect for the effort the cartoonists put into their work, even if I do not always enjoy the comic they’ve written. The three tiers of reviews (Tangents, Secants, and Chords) will remain unchanged.

And that’s the Tangents: Year in Review. Naturally, not all of these plans will work out; life is what happens when you’re busy making plans. But it’s better to shoot for the moon than to hide your head in the dirt and never bother changing. Even if I miss, I still end up out in the stars. But no matter what actually comes to pass on Tangents, I’d like to thank you all for reading. Through the good, through the bad, and through it all, you make this place what it is.

Magical Transvestite Cherry

While there are some benefits to writing a prequel to a story, one of the problems inherent in them is that your characters have to end up at a specific point when the story concludes. This isn’t always a problem, especially if the character is sufficiently ambiguous (or there’s a length of time between the end of the prequel and the story it precedes). But it can be difficult (if not depressing at times) writing a story while knowing that the story may very well end on a downer note. No doubt this is an issue that cartoonists Emily Brady and Ally Nuttall have faced while crafting the comic Magical Transvestite Cherry, which focuses on the only sympathetic member of the School of Marketable Magic (aka, Magical Girls) in the webcomic Footloose, seeing that when we first meet Steve (aka Cherry), he’s pretty much the reluctant minion to Footloose’s initial antagonist, Sparkle.

The foundation for Steve’s fall has already been laid, with Sparkle having acquired his father’s e-mail address and blackmail material, though to be honest, I’m not sure how Steve’s dad could do anything to him while he’s in Faerie… and I easily thought of a half dozen ways for him to sabotage Sparkle’s blackmail preemptively. Undoubtedly part of the reason he hasn’t is because he is destined (for a short while at least) to become Sparkle’s reluctant lackey. What’s worse, he’s found himself caught in the middle of the struggle between Sparkle and Daniel’s sister Jin; on the one hand, blackmail… the other? Sparkles (as opposed to the magical girl Sparkle), which are the bane to anyone in a cartoon environment. (I mean it. Keti suffered sparkles over An, and caused no end to the mischief inflicted on her in the first book of Footloose.)

In essence, Magical Transvestite Cherry is the story of Steve’s fall… while Footloose showcases his redemption (of a sort). It’s a rather depressing thought when you consider it. But we do know that Jin considered Steve decent enough to warn him away from Sparkle after the whole Failium incident rather than get him thrown out of the Dojo… and for more affectionate feelings to blossom between them. For MTC’s story to be complete, we would need to see not just his fall, but his redemption… which happened after Keti’s arrival. I must admit it would be amusing to see parts of Keti’s tale from Steve’s eyes, along with what it was that finally brings him and Jin together.