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		<title>Weregeek</title>
		<link>http://www.tangents.us/2010/10/26/weregeek/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Oct 2010 11:52:24 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tangent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Guest Review of Weregeek]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s the second guest review I received, compliments of Francisco De Freitas. I&#8217;ve been meaning to review the print compilation for this strip for a while now, so I appreciate this glimpse at a comic I found most amusing and worth reading.</p>
<p>&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;-</p>
<p><a href="http://www.weregeek.com/2010/10/15/" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/were20101015.jpg" width="350" height="123" cellpadding="2" border="0" align="right" hspace="5" /></a><a href="http://www.weregeek.com/">Weregeek</a> is, for the most part, a slice-of-life comic about Mark (pictured above) and the group of geeks he joins.  When the gang role play the comic takes on the look of the role play they are taking part in.</p>
<p>There are, however, some fantastical elements (I am not counting the role play images as fantastical as they are meant to be in the imagination of the characters).  The first of these is that there exists &#8220;weregeeks&#8221;.  Under the right conditions they can transform into humanoid creatures (see below).  In their weregeek form geeks are stronger but they are more geeky.  The other fantastical element is that there is a band of hunters that are trying to eliminate the world of geeks.</p>
<p>The main plot is centred around Sarah.  Mark has a girlfriend but, with him spending most of his time with his new friends, he isn&#8217;t spending as much time as she would like with her.  Sarah, on the other hand, would like to hook up with Mark but knows that he is taken.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.weregeek.com/2010/01/29/" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/were20100129.jpg" width="350" height="123" cellpadding="2" border="0" align="left" hspace="5" /></a>The hunters form the main sub-plot.  It bubbles along in the background and, just when you start forgetting about them, there&#8217;s another development.</p>
<p>The comic tends to follow Mark, Abbie (a friend of Sarah&#8217;s) and Sarah.  However, the comic sometimes centres on Joel, the mysterious member of the gang.</p>
<p>Do you love Star Trek and/or Star Wars?  Do you role play?  Do you like comics?  If the answer is &#8220;yes&#8221;, maybe you should <a href="http://www.weregeek.com/cast/">meet the gang</a>.</p>
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		<title>Bruno</title>
		<link>http://www.tangents.us/2010/10/21/bruno/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Oct 2010 12:30:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tangent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Guest review of the webcomic Bruno.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And it&#8217;s that time of year again, when the weather in the Northern Hemisphere starts growing cooler, nights longer, and as Halloween starts creeping over the horizon, the Guest Reviews appear. Unfortunately, the economy being as it is, we&#8217;ve had slim pickings this year in the Guest review front. We <i>do</i> have two nice reviews, however; the first from the creator of the webcomic <a href="www.amomentofpeace.net">A Moment of Peace</a>, Abigail Corfman. The next will be up on the 26th&#8230; followed by the first installment of a e-novel I&#8217;ve been writing on the 28th. And now for the review:</p>
<p>&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8211;</p>
<p><a href="http://www.baldwinpage.com/20070212.html" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/brun20070212.jpg" width="350" height="239" cellpadding="2" border="0" align="right" hspace="5" /></a><a href="http://www.baldwinpage.com/bruno.html">&#8216;Bruno&#8217;</a> is a black and white webcomic about a young painfully intelligent and blisteringly opinionated girl trying to find her place in the world. It is dialogue heavy by necessity &#8212; each &#8216;strip&#8217; is actually one long or tall panel with an illustrated scene and a conversation between characters. This is comic very much driven by characters, not by any sort of an overarching plot.</p>
<p>The comics vacillate between being long and rambling, and quick and pithy. Almost all of the humor is character based&#8211;Bruno&#8217;s reactions to people around her.</p>
<p>Bruno&#8217;s cynicism and indecisive anxiety can be grating, but it is generally offset by her wry sense of humor, insight, and occasional deviations into unrepentant silliness. As a reader you will probably find yourself empathizing with Bruno&#8217;s friends&#8211; and forgiving her her flaws for the sake of her charm and the occasional perfect luminescence of character she displays.</p>
<p>&#8216;Bruno&#8217; the comic has a very pronounced flaws that are extremely evident in the beginning, but gentle as the comic goes on. In the beginning, it tosses you immediately into the action without providing exposition. You need to pay careful attention to the conversations the characters are having to figure out who everyone is and where you are.</p>
<p>There are sufficient cues in the dialogue to orient you, but it&#8217;s easy to miss one (I didn&#8217;t figure out the comic had started in New England until Bruno left and came back) and it&#8217;s shocking to immediately have so much pressure on the reader to figure out everything.</p>
<p>On the bright side, this rewards an attentive the reader with understanding and the satisfaction of having figured things out for yourself. Even when somewhat incomprehensible, Bruno&#8217;s style is interesting and engaging. The comic doesn&#8217;t talk down to you, the characters regularly discuss complex ideas and don&#8217;t shy away from big words. Is rewarding and educational to read.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.baldwinpage.com/20070101.html" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/brun20070101.jpg" width="349" height="108" cellpadding="2" border="0" align="left" hspace="5" /></a>But getting back to criticism, there are a few points early on where it&#8217;s simply impossible to get sufficiently oriented. I initially assumed Bruno was at college because people kept talking about it, and was startled to find out she was on break. There were many instances where you meet a character, and only later discover how significant they are. There also many instances where you need a character, and then never ever see them again.</p>
<p>The snapshot style of the comic makes it difficult to intuitively keep track of how much time is passing. Given all these obstacles it&#8217;s extremely impressive that it all hangs together as well as it does. The author quickly learns how to transition us more gradually from situation to situation, and to focus more on individual characters (other than Bruno) to help us develop relationships with them.</p>
<p>The comic really comes into its own with the introduction of Amy, Bruno&#8217;s niece. This happens in the archives on April 29, 1996. if you&#8217;re not entertained by then, put it back on the digital shelf.</p>
<p>I want to make a particular note about characters. The vastness of Bruno&#8217;s cast is a beautiful and potentially befuddling thing. Christopher Baldwin does an exquisite job drawing faces. Faces pop out from every comic, the focus and the point. Vivid and expressive. The story is character based, and the drawing style expresses this by making people&#8217;s emotions the centerpiece of every image.</p>
<p>And the voices of the characters are wonderfully varied and evocative. It&#8217;s obvious this author loves people.</p>
<p>The comic has some trouble resolving itself, and sometimes seems to lack direction. Appropriately, Bruno constantly struggles with these very same problems. You could argue that this indecision is an elegant metaphor for Bruno&#8217;s life, but it seems more likely that it&#8217;s the artist not knowing what to do next.</p>
<p>To summarize: Bruno&#8217;s main flaw is that it is sometimes confusing and indecisive, but it&#8217;s a beautiful and challenging character piece.</p>
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		<title>Guest Reviews &#8211; A Girl and Her Fed</title>
		<link>http://www.tangents.us/2009/10/20/guest-reviews-a-girl-and-her-fed/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 16:00:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tangent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[A guest review written by HiFranc of the webcomic "A Girl and Her Fed."]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heyla all! Assuming the auto-updater actually works properly, this will show up while I&#8217;m freezing my extremities in Colorado while hunting Elk armed with a digital camera (because no one is going to trust me with a hunting rifle! Besides, hunting licenses cost money!); actually, I&#8217;m accompanying my father after years of his offering to take me along. Assuming everything goes well, I should be back before Halloween. And if it doesn&#8217;t&#8230; well, that&#8217;ll explain the lack of updates. Guest reviews will be up on October 14, 20, and 25.</p>
<p>Seeing that I&#8217;m entirely too lazy to write up reviews ahead of time, I put out a call for guest reviews. This is the second of the reviews, by HiFranc (who has recommended this comic to me in the past).</p>
<p>&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8211;</p>
<p>Review of A Girl and Her Fed:</p>
<p>When Otter, the artist, started her style was very different to what it is now.  She is in the process of updating the archives to make the art consistent throughout, and to correct plot holes and pacing.  At the time of writing (August 2009) the update is not yet complete so the old strips form the middle  if you go to the new archives.</p>
<p>I’ll warn you now that there  is a lot of swearing in this comic and there are a few bedroom  scenes.</p>
<p>To get an idea of the art and  a quick introduction to two of the characters here is the first  page:</p>
<p>The first page as it originally was:<br />
<a href="http://www.agirlandherfed.com/comic/?0" target="_blank"><img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; text-align: center; width: 275px; display: block; height: 350px;" src="http://www.tangents.us/images/agah05202006.jpg" border="0" alt="" /></a></p>
<p>The new version of the first  page:<br />
<a href="http://www.agirlandherfed.com/redone/redo1intro.shtml" target="_blank"><img style="margin: 0px auto 10px; text-align: center; width: 325px; display: block; height: 396px;" src="http://www.tangents.us/images/agah05202006a.jpg" border="0" alt="" /></a></p>
<p>The comic is about a young  woman (the &#8220;Girl&#8221; of the title), who is in touch with the ghost of Benjamin  Franklin.  At the start she thinks  he’s just a hallucination because she is the only person who can see him.  The Government is keeping an eye on her because for some reason she’s unjustly listed on a no fly list.  She is also an unpaid intern for a newspaper.</p>
<p>The agent (wait for it&#8230;.the &#8221;Fed&#8221; of the title) who has been assigned to her has his own invisible friend.  He is part of a secret programme where a chip has been inserted into his head and the display is  projected in mid air such that only people in the programme can see it.  The interface looks like President  Bush.</p>
<p>Someone connected to a local  politician dies and our heroine[1] decides to investigate.   The agent decides to help her so the two of them start following the  clues.  The comic follows them on  their mission to discover the truth.  It also charts their  relationship.</p>
<p>Otter has informed us that the  comic will end when the adventure is over.   The plan is for the comic to finish sometime in 2011.</p>
<p>How else can I describe  the comic?  The plot is based on at least one conspiracy  theory.  There is a mixture of light hearted strips and deadly serious  ones.  The humour comes mostly from the interactions between the characters  and some that you would expect in a sitcom.  In its own way it pokes fun at  the paranoia that has engulfed most countries since the events of  2001.</p>
<p>How would I summarise its  style?  The first thing that I can think of is: MASH meets Enemy of  the State (but our heroine and hero are far from  helpless).</p>
<p>In short, if you want a fun  conspiracy thriller with a lot of humour, ghosts and strange characters then A  Girl and Her Fed is the comic for you.  If that doesn&#8217;t grab you then  you&#8217;re probably best giving it a miss.</p>
<hr size="1" />[1] Sorry  for the lack of a name but the author has specifically hidden that information  from her  readers.</p>
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