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		<title>dream*scar</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Feb 2012 02:13:33 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tangent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[It’s embarrassing to admit this, but I’ve a small collection of webcomics I regularly read that I’ve never gotten around to reviewing. Part of this lies with the inspirational nature of my review-writing; often I joke that if the Muse isn’t interested, the review doesn’t get written. Sadly, the contemporary fantasy comic dream*scar is one [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.dream-scar.net/?id=161" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/drsc0161.jpg" width="325" height="488" border="0" align="right" hspace="5" /></a>It’s embarrassing to admit this, but I’ve a small collection of webcomics I regularly read that I’ve never gotten around to reviewing. Part of this lies with the <i>inspirational</i> nature of my review-writing; often I joke that if the Muse isn’t interested, the review doesn’t get written. Sadly, the contemporary fantasy comic <a href="http://www.dream-scar.net/">dream*scar</a> is one such victim of my fussy Muse; this is a decided shame seeing that I’ve been enjoying the comic for well over a year now. A combination of an interesting storyline, a sympathetic heroine, and a fascinating setting has kept me regularly reading it. Getting my Muse to help with the review, on the other hand, has been a task that has seen multiple false starts.</p>
<p>Cartoonist Heather Meade quickly captured my interest with a surreal and disturbing start, with half a dozen teenagers lying bloodied on the ground before a young green-eyed girl with blood splattered on her face. From there, things only become yet more surreal, with the girl’s reflection stepping out of the mirror to confront her, before finally Vix starts awake, the bloody scene revealed to be a dream. It was a most superb start to the comic and the comic shifts to a more mundane setting, with Vix starting a new year of school, and we’re treated to a brief moment of normalcy before her world starts collapsing around her.</p>
<p>Along the way, Meade does an excellent job of introducing background elements to her world without overwhelming readers with information dumps, <a href="http://www.dream-scar.net/?id=35">outside of a three-page summary</a> concerning “unhumans” and how they’re treated by humanity as a whole. (To sum up quickly? Segregated and discriminated against.) Most of the background elements are provided by Vix’s own internal monologues as she comes to cope with the revelations of her own heritage and trying to find out who and what she is after Vix learns that the life she knew had been a lie.</p>
<p>The artwork tends to be fairly clean, with a good grasp of effective shading of characters and backgrounds, though there is a definite manga influence to Meade’s artwork. This is especially true with the frequent chibi-style artistic elements which often are used to depict moments of frustration and intense emotion with Vix. To be honest, I’m not fond of these elements; Meade has shown considerable talent with her art, and doesn’t need to rely on such crutches as over-exaggerated art found in the chibi-style. Given that DS has had over 160 updates to date, this is unlikely to change, and I’m sure there are plenty of readers who have no problem with this artistic element.</p>
<p>Most importantly to me, the comic has a firm story and has maintained a good grasp on continuity. This is partly because Meade had initially written much of the story as a novel before she adapted it to a graphic novel format. The pacing is fairly slow in places, but it helps in building the atmosphere and mood. The cast of characters outside of Vix have proven&#8230; interesting, though I must admit I liked her human friends better than most of the unhumans; no doubt with further exposure I’ll warm up to them as well. On the whole, <i>dream*scar</i> is definitely worth reading, and a webcomic I highly recommend.</p>
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		<title>Outsider</title>
		<link>http://www.tangents.us/2012/01/17/outsider/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Jan 2012 04:22:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tangent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[For the longest time I’ve been a fan of science fiction, both written and on television and in movies. One of the few cartoons I remember watching as a child was the old Star Blazers series (Space Battleship Yamato, for those purists out there, though the dubbed version was among the best of the early [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider095.html" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/outs095.jpg" width="325" height="460" border="0" align="right" hspace="5" /></a>For the longest time I’ve been a fan of science fiction, both written and on television and in movies. One of the few cartoons I remember watching as a child was the old <i>Star Blazers</i> series (<i>Space Battleship Yamato</i>, for those purists out there, though the dubbed version was among the best of the early dubbed animes). Perhaps that is part of the reason behind my fondness for space operas and science fiction that focuses on the exploration of outer space (though I’ll admit that having been born in the Apollo Era might also have something to do with this). </p>
<p>As such, <a href="http://www.well-of-souls.com/outsider/index.html">Outsider</a> fits quite nicely in my interests. It’s the story of Ensign Alex Jardin, who was a member of the Earth scout ship <i>Bellarmine</i> as they scouted out a warzone between two alien factions: the Loroi (who had a reputation as genociders) and the Umiak (who had a reputation as slavers). Neither side would allow an alien race to remain neutral, possibly due to the potential threat of a neutral power could pose should it wait until the two primary powers weakened one another through nonstop warfare. </p>
<p>Fortunately, humanity was warned by one race who <i>had</i> tried to remain neutral&#8230; until the Umiak invaded and enslaved their populace. These refugees are also kind enough to teach humanity the common trade tongue, of which we get some dialogue before the comic switches over to the trade tongue full-time (rather than use < and > as a means of identifying non-English language all the time, which would get old fast). </p>
<p>While I won’t spoil too many things for you, through situations beyond Alex’s control he finds himself stranded on the Loroi vessel <i>Tempest</i>, where he finds himself among a race of blue-skinned, pointy-eared telepathic amazons who are quite amazed at how&#8230; similar humans are physically to the Loroi. They also find it somewhat disturbing that humans are resistant to Loroi telepathic probes, especially as much of their intelligence-gathering and defense depends on their telepathy, which comes in handy for Alex as he soon realizes despite a telepathic interrogation that he has some level of bargaining power as the impromptu ambassador for his species.</p>
<p>Interestingly, <i>Outsider</i> plays with several tropes traditional to the space opera genre and then twists them to interesting ends. One such trope was when Beryl, the tactical analyst assigned to Alex, asked about his mating needs and if he was going to require medical aid in this regard. Rather than a cheap come on (as I initially believed it to be), it was a cold analytical determination based in part because the Loroi culture has a significant female-to-male ratio, with males playing the role of studs (the Loroi find it fascinating that male and female humans are at a 1:1 ratio for the most part). Likewise, Alex didn’t play it off as a means to get into a blue-skinned alien’s pants&#8230; but instead was taken aback and slightly offended by what was said.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.well-of-souls.com/outsider/outsider079.html" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/outs079.jpg" width="325" height="345" border="0" align="left" hspace="5" /></a>At several times I’d watch Beryl show considerable interest in Alex, watching him constantly while he reacted to events around him. Eventually I realized this wasn’t attraction or the like. Instead, Beryl was <i>studying</i> this human to learn as much as she could of him through observation (especially as telepathic examinations had provided minimal data). In short, he wasn’t a person as such (or at least he wasn’t considered an equal to the Loroi). He was a specimen to be studied. No doubt half the reason why he wasn’t dissected or the like was that alive, he provided more value to the Loroi than he would dead. The moment his value ended, he could very well end up dead. </p>
<p>Another thing I found fascinating was the character of Alex himself. While he was depicted as at-times brash with a tendency to get into trouble, the moment he’s alone on the <i>Tempest</i> he shows considerable constraint. He avoids mouthing off (he thinks of it, but he behaves himself for the most part) and puts himself forward as a professional. It is a refreshing change from the traditional variations of his character in both anime and in most space operas, and I must admit I was surprised to see this type of character behaving as intelligently as he should.</p>
<p>This isn’t to say everything is perfect with the comic. One thing I find puzzling is the fact that a species that evolved telepathy as its primary method for communication would also evolve vocal cords that would be effective in communicating with other species. Likewise, I was puzzled at the commander of the fleet issuing orders verbally; perhaps this was partly because of the non-Loroi accompanying the Loroi task force as they fought an Umiak attack force, but it still seemed incongruous. The final thing actually isn’t an issue, and that’s the physical similarities between humanity and Loroi&#8230; instead, this seems to be a plot point that may play out later in the series. And even so, these are minor quibbles at best.</p>
<p>To sum up, <i>Outsider</i> is a fascinating, well-drawn, and well-written science fiction story of first contact with an alien species. The aliens might <i>seem</i> fairly human, but there were some refreshing differences that allowed the Loroi, the Umiak, and the other species depicted to be <i>alien</i> rather than funny-looking humans (though the Loroi were still closest to humanity in actions and behaviors). Personally, I suspect <i>Outsider</i> will appeal to any fan of good storytelling, even if they don’t usually enjoy science fiction, and I have to highly recommend this comic.</p>
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		<title>Skin Horse</title>
		<link>http://www.tangents.us/2012/01/12/skin-horse-7/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Jan 2012 04:39:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tangent</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[On a bad day, Shaenon Garrity and Jeffrey Wells’ mad science webcomic Skin Horse is damn good. So when I state that the culmination of the Once and Future storyline has been&#8230; inspired, then please accept this as my affirmation that the comic has been rocking hard enough to make Linkin Park sound like soft [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://skin-horse.com/comics/01122012-2/" target="_blank"><img src="http://www.tangents.us/images/skho20120112.gif" width="200" height="155" border="0" align="right" hspace="5" /></a>On a bad day, Shaenon Garrity and Jeffrey Wells’ mad science webcomic <a href="http://skin-horse.com/">Skin Horse</a> is damn good. So when I state that the culmination of the Once and Future storyline has been&#8230; inspired, then please accept this as my affirmation that the comic has been rocking hard enough to make Linkin Park sound like soft rock. It’s not just the fact that Unity is skinriding Dr. Lee (whom she has vowed to kill, though I must admit some curiosity if she’ll still hold the same sentiments once she is returned to her own body). It’s the fact that she managed to outwit the mad scientist Tigerlily <i>and</i> has psyched her before the fight even began. While it might seem out of character given Unity’s tendency to bite first and think afterward, I’m more than willing to give that a pass and suggest it’s a combination of character growth and Unity’s possessing of Dr. Lee (who <i>does</i> possess considerable brains). Well played, Garrity and Wells. Well played indeed. </p>
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