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Sunset Grill

Yet another comic I’ve found thanks to suggestions on an online social network is the 3D science fiction comic Sunset Grill. I must be honest and say my initial gut reaction was to avoid this comic. I’m not a big fan of 3D comics, and this comic nibbled at the edges of my “uncanny valley” perception. However, after a strong recommendation from Karen “KEZ” Howard (no relation) of The War of Winds I decided to give the comic a second shot. I soon found myself drawn into the story and more often than not ignoring the artwork in lieu of some truly amusing dialogue and situations that amused me to no end.

Please indulge me in a moment as I go off on a tangent concerning the Uncanny Valley. For the uninitiated, UV is a sensation some people feel when they see something that almost looks real… but is just off enough that instead the object invokes a sense of Other and revulsion. One such example lies with the zombie franchise; having a corpse walking around and trying to interact with the world has a tendency to profoundly disturb some people. 3D comics often invoke a similar reaction, and while critics often speak of the Uncanny Valley effect, we rarely explain methods that webcartoonists can use to deal with the situation.

The first solution is for the cartoonist to make their comic more cartoony. When art looks less real, readers are better able to suspend their disbelief and the UV effect doesn’t hit. The second is far more difficult: create art that is so photorealistic that it’s nearly impossible to differentiate the art from reality. This is a very time consuming process and often involves software resources that aren’t affordable to most cartoonists. But there is one last solution that was used by the science fiction webcomic Crimson Dark: use the 3D art software to create line-art. Merely by adding “lines” to the art, the art takes a step back from realism and may thus eliminate the UV effect. Just some food for thought.

While I described Sunset Grill as a science fiction comic, it is remarkably unlike the vast majority of science fiction webcomics out there. It’s much closer to the dark and gritty science fictions of “Blade Runner” and “Neuromancer” than the glowing futures depicted in “Star Trek” and “Babylon 5.” This isn’t to say that the comic is depressing or that the characters are unlikable; I found myself laughing frequently, and most of the characters are likeable and fun to read. But rather than talking about wily starship pilots and the like, the comic focuses on more mundane people. Specifically, poor people. Outside of a couple of exceptions, the primary characters are lower class, and have to deal with such things as street crime, extortion, and drugs.

In fact, one ongoing storyline focuses on gang warfare that started with a simple turf scuffle that ended up with someone dead and a vendetta that will result in several people dead. Some of these might very well be characters we’ve become attached to. And one regular character (who is involved in the gang hostilities) is the “tête d’rue” (or street boss) of one of the street gangs… and regularly extorts protection money from businesses and people on his street. He also takes his responsibilities seriously and looks to protect his “charges” (at one point giving a shop owner and mother a discount for medicine rather than extort more money she might not be able to afford). So even in the case of the criminal elements, these characters are not just two-dimensional ciphers but living breathing people.

This isn’t to say the comic focuses only on the poorer people; one of the regulars, Travis, is a specialist in the Imperial Armed Forces, while Riley is a public defender who pulled himself out of the gutter (though his wife constantly pushes him to further his career and abandon their lower-class roots). But it is the poorer characters who drive the comic (with Lena, who’s a waitress at the Sunset Grill and a part-time college student, often taking center stage); in fact, it’s the poorer characters who are the heart of SG, taking a hard look at society through the distorted lens of the science fiction genre.

If it weren’t for the fact we have green-skinned women in the comic (no, they’re not Orion slave girls, though the “Greenies” were genetically engineered to be a slave race before they were freed by the Emperor) then readers would be hard-pressed to not any blatant science fiction elements in the comic. Though I should mention that one storyline focusing on Travis actually delved into Skinlander (or “Greenie”) culture and the hatred some Skinlanders have on mixed-breed children (humans and “Greenies” can interbreed, but their progeny are sterile); for a comic that focuses more often than not on humorous elements, it was a rather deep and touching story about the loneliness and confusion of a young unwed mother carrying a child hated by her own people… and perhaps even touched upon the sentiments of some minorities that consider “mixed-blood” people to be an abomination.

Many of the science fiction elements either appear primarily in the background details (which aren’t mentioned in great detail in the comic itself) or are setting elements that aren’t precisely visible in the story itself. This would make sense when you consider fancier technologies to be the toys of the rich and well-to-do, while poorer people make do with cheap knockoffs that aren’t fancy or look that futuristic. And in many ways this is the best use of science fiction; not as the driver of the story, but as an element that enhances the story as a whole.

I should add that recent stories have stepped away from some of the humor that first drew me in. While I still find myself laughing over character interactions and dialogue, there has been a growth of darker and more introspective elements in the comic. Despite this, Sunset Grill is still a most enjoyable read. If you’re able to move past possible Uncanny Valley elements found in most 3D comics and focus more on characterization and dialogue, then you’re likely to enjoy this comic. As such, I definitely have to recommend it, with the addendum that updates have been intermittent of late as cartoonist Kat Feete works around a new baby; hopefully she’ll soon get the comic back on course and updating regularly once more.

Random Encounter

One bit of advice new webcartoonists are often offered is to send guest-art and guest-comics to other, more established webcomics. Personally I’m not sure how effective this is; I think I can count the number of times I’ve clicked a link included in a guest-comic on one hand – and I’ve been reading comics online for 11 years now. But recently I indulged myself when I saw a guest-comic over at Amber William’s contemporary fantasy comic Dan and Mab’s Furry Adventures, partly because I recognized Merlin’s handle from the DMFA forums and partly just on a whim. Merlin’s site, DHS Comix, is actually host to two fantasy comics, set fifty years apart and focusing on students attending Dhark’s Hero School (as heroes apparently are made, not born, in this setting).

To be honest, I got confused between the sequel comic and a third comic which Merlin had recently drawn a guest comic for; as such, I’ll be focusing on her first comic: Random Encounter, a fantasy short story comic focusing on the ensemble cast of students, as well as the teachers who try to instruct these nine youngsters on a variety of skills to try and keep them alive. Each storyline tends to focus on one or two students, though additional students will often be drawn into the mix depending on the story. In an interesting twist, the worlds of DHS Comix diverges from traditional fantasy tropes by avoiding traditional fantasy races such as elves and dwarves. Instead, we have several winged species (Feathrys and Scalers), humans, ‘Taurs (who have a human upper torso and an animal/monster lower torso), Monsters, and a variety of other species.

Naturally, the cast of RE tends to be a fairly diverse crew. One thing I found interesting was that a number of the students are illiterate (though that is probably to be expected in the case of the Monster student). I’m not quite sure why Heroes need to know how to read and perform math, but undoubtedly it’s so they’re not taken advantage of in signing contracts or collecting pay. And we do get to see several of the students go out on “field training” (usually unsupervised) with the school collecting the fees that would normally go to the hero if it was a more experienced hero. Needless to say, this is played for laughs more often than not; none of the students have been badly hurt (let alone killed), though one of them has a price on her head (the ‘Taur, Delta Morningstar) after… well, let’s just say it was a rather unfortunate incident that involved royalty who deserved getting a smack upside the head and we’ll leave it at that.

The students range between likeable incompetents to brash braggarts to total ciphers; my personal favorite is a young woman named Loki Kiborn who has a tendency toward skipping history class (as entirely too boring) and a mouth that would probably get her killed in a more dramatic comic. Needless to say, between her name, her garb (I swear, she stole her look from Inu Yasha; I have expect him to show up sometime with a cease-and-desist order, and now that I’ve suggested it no doubt someone will draw it), and her sardonic nature, there was no way she wasn’t going to be my favorite character.

Another thing I found interesting about the comics was the blatant persecution of worshippers of the Trickster God – while we’ve not seen it happen on-panel, it’s widely known that Tricksters will, when caught, be stoned to death. There are a couple of Tricksters who are a part of the RE cast though of them we only know for certain that magic teacher Drake Piperion is a trickster (using her magic to mimic spells from other religions, which is partly how she was able to get a school at the Hero School to begin with. (As a brief aside, I have my suspicions that the character “Jinx” is the second Trickster. While he may have been cursed by the Trickster God with fluffy ears and a tail, how better to disguise a Trickster than with a curse used to mark the greatest enemies of the Trickster God?)

The comic’s art has slowly improved over the years. While the early work wasn’t nearly as rough as some of the early art in comics I’ve come across (such as Schlock Mercenary and Clan of the Cats) you can clearly tell the difference when looking at current art compared to the first strips. In addition, the art style at the end of chapters is often oddly colored and often looks rushed or incomplete compared to the regular art. There are also several broken links lurking in the comic; fortunately, it’s easy enough to type in the new URL, or skip ahead to the next chapter and then click the back button to see what you’ve missed. It’s a minor inconvenience, however, and the comic’s well worth reading despite the occasional broken link.

Moron County

When I first stumbled across the surreal webcomic Moron County, it was due to a most… imaginative advertisement over at the webcomic Footloose. Bear with me for a moment as this is a tale worth regaling; for a while, Project Wonderful has been running a variety of advertisements with blonde-haired women for a comic called Nicky 510. The problem is, Nicky 510 is a surreal black-and-white comic about a hyperactive pre-teen, his twin brother who seems fashioned after Alex P. Keaton from the 80s TV show “Family Ties,” and basically no blondes to be seen. Apparently, Grady Phillips of Moron Country noticed this as well, and put up an ad with the two female leads who pointed out that they are actually in the comic, unlike the girls over at Nicky 510. I was so amused by the content of the ad that I promptly saved the URL and wrote a note to remind me of what drew me in in the first place.

The comic’s “New Reader” page describes the comic as a science fiction comedy; personally I’m more apt to label it under surreal comics, seeing that its stories range from “odd” to “did I remember to take my meds today?” Mind you, this isn’t a bad thing. The insanity in MC is such that I ended up staying up past midnight reading the archives rather than writing the review I’d originally planned. And I was more than half tempted to say “screw work” and stay up until I finished the archive crawl. Needless to say, when you start reading this, make sure you’re doing it on a weekend when you’ve the spare time to spend (or a dozen energy drinks to get you through the next day). Phillips pulls this off through a combination of interesting (and surreal) storylines and characters that are a lot of fun to watch.

While the comic nominally follows a young slacker, Biff Alperson, on a variety of adventures he has in his hometown of Moron County (originally Morone County until Biff and his brother vandalized the town sign and blamed it on his manipulative cousin), it would be more accurate to state the comic has an ensemble cast. This includes Nina Fristrom, a sarcastic young woman who drags Biff back to Moron County to look for some prize collectible (the Obsidian Moogle) which ends up being one of the driving elements of the comic for the first two volumes of the series, as well as some college friends working for a secret evil branch of NASA responsible for the probable cancellation of the James Webb Space Telescope, a couple of mad scientists, and Biff’s ex-girlfriend Vyona (who’s still seriously crushing on Biff for some odd reason probably involving blunt trauma). Oh, and did I forget to mention the blue anthropomorphic rabbit named Bobbes who realizes this is all a webcomic and who apparently drove one poor girl mad after telling her (and I’m fairly certain I know who he told).

And no, I’m not making this up (except for the bit about the James Webb Space Telescope). To steal an old joke, it’s like MC lurks in back alleys, mugs other webcomics, and rifles through their pockets for spare insanity. Needless to say, the characters are a major draw, and while the comic initially focuses on Biff, in time it starts branching out more and more to include his buddies working at NASA, the occasional glimpse into the lives of Biff’s antagonists, and several other characters that apparently have enough dirt on Phillips that they can blackmail him into keeping them on the roster as regulars.

Naturally there’s more to the comic than just wacky hijinks, wannabe supervillains, and mad science. The growing relationship between Biff and Nina is amusing to watch, though given the comedic nature of the comic it may lack some of the subtle nuances found in more serious comics. Naturally, Phillips runs with traditional relationship tropes and makes sure that neither Biff nor Nina are able to outright tell the other they’re in love with the other. While it would be easy to blame it on Moonlighting Syndrome (where once the romantic tension is out of the air the storyline collapses due to weak writing and an inability to make the tensions found in regular relationships interesting for viewers), I think that Phillips is just indulging in some mild cruelty, especially as Vyona is intent on getting Biff to date her again for some insane reason that hasn’t really been expanded upon in the comic.

Given the comic is somewhere around 500 updates in length, I’m not going to try to summarize events (as I could go on for several pages and only touch upon only a handful of the plots in the comic). To be honest, I’m not sure I could if I tried, given the general insanity and inventiveness of the comic. What I will say is that it’s well worth reading, especially for fans of comedic comics and zany antics. The cartoonish art style also suits the comic nicely (even if I’m left wondering how they support those huge heads on such spindly bodies) and has evolved nicely over the years. So in short, Moron County is one of those comics that’s going to suck hours out of your life and likely encourage you to indulge in several archive crawls to try and figure out what’s going on… and yet leave you wanting more.

Bridges

Warning: This comic contains brief nudity, swearing and subject matter that may be objectionable to some people. Viewer discretion is advised, and I’d not consider the comic work-safe.

While the majority of the webcomics I read tend to be fantasies and science fictions (with a growing number of journal comics tossed into the mix), every so often I find myself embroiled in more mundane fiction. Given my issues with embarrassing situations, this isn’t always easy for me and I’ve found myself abandoning comics on more than one occasion when the subject matter hit too close to home. This was nearly the fate that the high school drama comic Bridges suffered; the comic languished in my reading queue for weeks before I finally bit the bullet and forced myself to read through the archives. On more than one occasion I found myself pausing my archive crawl and distracting myself with other issues, but there was something integral to the comic itself that didn’t let me just give up on it.

This isn’t to say that Bridges has a superbly written storyline with characters you will instantly fall in love with. If anything, the characters are quite human, which is part of their charm. The comic initially focused on Quinn, a seemingly shallow and spoiled teenaged cheerleader who found herself forced to go to summer camp apparently because her parents were upset with her because she didn’t make squad captain (though I have to suspect there was more to it than just that; we’re being given the story from Quinn’s perspective at this point, and she admits to being a “rich b##ch”). Interestingly, she strikes a rather unexpected friendship with Maddie, a shy overweight girl who somehow managed to (through a combination of kindness and perception) break through Quinn’s shell and find a kindred spirit.

While Quinn is fairly central at this point to the story (though I suspect as the comic evolves, it will shift to more of an ensemble cast), I have to admit I find Maddie to be the more interesting character. For one thing, she’s overweight and yet still attractive. This tends to be fairly uncommon in literature and comics seeing that it’s culturally acceptable to treat overweight people poorly – seriously, if you were to take any of the fat jokes or snide comments said against overweight people and said something similar to nearly any other minority and there’d be a tremendous outcry against the comments. It’s also fairly clear (at least to me) that Maddie has body acceptance issues, and I suspect she wears long-sleeve shirts for a specific reason besides hiding what her body looks like. While I’m not quite sure why Quinn opened up to her so quickly (given her irritability toward other girls who tried to be friends with her), her status as an outsider has helped her perceive things others would overlook.

Other members of Quinn’s circle of friends includes Harley, her former best friend who’s into the goth and piercing scene and has no problem making a scene if he thinks one of his friends is in the wrong. (He’s also prejudiced against the preppy scene, partly due to losing his best friend for two years as Quinn tried to fit in with them.) On the opposite side of the friendship spectrum is Sarah, one of the few cheerleaders who like Quinn has been living a double life… and who ends up abandoning the cheerleader clique soon after Quinn does, especially once Quinn starts spurning her because she’s a cheerleader.

As an aside, one thing I actually enjoyed about Bridges was that Quinn’s reformation isn’t instantaneous. While it’s apparent Quinn is a very conflicted girl who acts unpleasant to fit in with her social circle (a rather unpleasant group of cheerleaders that seem corrupted by the squad captain’s crude behavior), even after she abandons the cheerleaders and hangs out with Maddie and Harley, who was her best friend until a couple years ago, she still will slip into old habits on occasion (especially when the cheerleaders are concerned). It’s refreshing to see character growth treated as a gradual process, with inevitable backsliding.

This is actually the second incarnation of Bridges; cartoonist Kris Justus initially started the comic back in 2001, and it ran for 400 updates until early 2004. While I’ve not done more than skim a couple of the original comics, I actually prefer the current incarnation, primarily due to the differences in Quinn’s personality (with her being more caustic and imperfect than the quick impression I got from her in the old comic). The artwork has significantly improved from 2004, and while there are some initial stumbles with coloring and art, once Justus finds her pace the art improves significantly. There are some elements that don’t quite work for me (such as her having almost been chosen for the Olympics and turning it down because it didn’t fit her parents expectations of her) but these flaws aren’t fatal to the comic. If you enjoy school-genre comics and stories with flawed characters, then you should enjoy Bridges; I must admit I found it an acquired taste myself, but one I’m more than willing to give a chance.

Atomic Laundromat

Back when I first started reading comic books in the 90s, I stumbled across an old Spiderman comic that had the hero visiting a Laundromat and sitting around in his underwear while waiting for his costume to finish washing (and drying if I remember right). This actually was a recurring theme for Spidey; I recall they did something similar in the Ultimate Spiderman series back when it was actually decent. I have to wonder if those old comics with a superhero waiting for his (or her) costume to finish may have been the inspiration for the humor webcomic Atomic Laundromat, though in spirit it’s far closer to the old Damage Control comics Marvel Comics used to put out.

The comic is set at the Atomic Laundromat, an aptly-named facility (with nuclear-powered dryers) that caters to the superhero and supervillain crowd in providing cleaning and repair services for costumes and armor worn by villains and heroes alike. The owner and manager of the facility is David, a young man with no powers of his own but a lineage that includes the world’s greatest superhero and a former despotic ruler of an evil Galactic Empire who got married (in a shotgun-esque ceremony) after the two were trapped in an alternative dimension with nothing to do for some time (and apparently no supply of condoms)). Amusingly enough, David has six superpowered siblings (both older and younger) who he doesn’t exactly see eye-to-eye with as David’s opinion is that true power doesn’t come with capes and powers, but instead from things that are real: trust, hard work and the like.

The primary cast includes Angela, a redheaded lawyer who specializes in superhero court cases and who is a childhood friend of David (as well as the girl he’s crushing on something fierce), Juno, a three-eyed mystic who started working at the Laundromat because her precognition demanded it, Bob, a robotic washing machine that keeps on hitting on various electronics, and a duck Bob adopted that (after eating some radioactive waste) mutated and developed the ability to teleport (and eat pretty much anything). As the characters develop, little details emerge to help flesh out the cast such as Angela’s deep-seated desire for superpowers of her own, and Juno’s dislike of her own abilities as it takes all the spontaneity out of her life, but on the whole Atomic Laundromat focuses more on humor than drama.

While the comic is primarily comedic in nature (and has a number of gag-a-day strips that can stand on their own), there are several storylines developing. Angela’s above-mentioned desire for superpowers of her own has been shown on several occasions, though we’re only given a few blatant clues as to her desire (unless of course you count her constant dating of superheroes); as for her relationship with David, it is unlikely we’ll see them go beyond friends anytime soon (though cartoonist Armando Valenzuela did tease readers with one comic) as Angela is unwilling to ruin her friendship with David despite their mutual attraction.

Another interesting aspect to the comic lies with David’s relationship with his father, and his fears that he might lose his dad one of these days. Given that few comic book heroes have children old enough to realize how dangerous their parents’ lifestyle is (unless time travel is involved), it’s a theme seldom touched upon (at least, from this aspect). I suspect there’s a bit of foreshadowing going on here, though I’m not sure if Valenzuela will actually go so far as to have David lose his father seeing that the comic is primarily comedic in nature.

Much like the majority of webcomics, Atomic Laundromat’s artwork has slowly evolved over time; it started out with black-and-white artwork, shifted to greyscale, and finally took the leap to color (though given the shading that Valenzuela did with the greyscale, I suspect coloring the strip didn’t take too much extra time). The comic frequently utilizes comedic interludes and one-shot humor strips, while the storyline comics occurred frequently enough to keep my interest. Needless to say, I enjoyed the comic immensely and highly recommend it to my readers; my one warning is that you might want to wait until the weekend (or some period when you have free time available) before reading as you may find yourself clicking on the “next comic” icon while saying “this will be the last one… I swear it!”

Questionable Content

I have to admit that when Dora and Marten broke up in the surreal slice-of-life comic Questionable Content, part of me was expecting for these two to work things out and end up back together again. For all my irritation at some of Dora’s quirks (and her disrespect for Marten’s privacy), they seemed to be a fairly happy couple. (I suppose it didn’t help that Randy Milholland (of Something Positive) drew a guest comic that ridiculed the whole breakup and hinted that Dora still has feelings for Marten.) So seeing Dora going out on a date with someone else (amusingly enough her male counterpart from The Secret Bakery) was a bit of a surprise, all things considered.

Not that the date is going to be anything other than a huge disaster, mind you. Dora’s only been in counseling for a short while, and her freaking out over Faye’s casual acceptance that Dora’s going out on a date is evidence enough that she is just as damaged as she was when she dated Marten. What’s more, I’d be willing to bet that her counterpart from the bakery is just as screwed up as Dora is, and that we’ll be seeing things blow up spectacularly. Probably the only thing that would make this even more insane is for Marten to somehow end up at the restaurant Dora’s at, allowing for yet another blowup between the two.

Fortunately, the traditional sitcom approach seems to be lacking: Marten’s going to a party his friend and coworker Tai is throwing (as she has the hots for Dora as well), so we’re not likely to see him picked up by some stray girl who actually was dating Dora’s counterpart. Though I have to admit, it would be amusing to see a female equivalent to Marten; the only problem is I suspect they’d hit it off far better than Marten and Dora ultimately did, so there would be little reason for them to accidentally sabotage Dora’s date. Thankfully, whatever wacky hijinks ensue will likely be caused by Dora alone. This is a good thing; I suspect Marten’s suffered enough for now.

Girl Genius

One problem that can arise with epic stories is story bloat, when the varied subplots and tertiary characters threaten to bog down the primary storyline. It can be a more subtle aspect of complexity in storytelling, as it makes sense for the secondary and tertiary characters to have their stories told. Given the length of time it takes to tell a story (especially in a graphic format) these subplots can be important in retaining the cartoonist and writer’s interest in the story they’ve crafted. The problem is that these side-stories can start to dominate the plot itself. This can alienate fans who are likely more interested in the primary protagonists and their central story, than that of characters who didn’t appear until some ways into the story.

Lately the gaslamp fantasy webcomic Girl Genius has shown several signs of this sort of story bloat. When you consider Agatha Heterodyne (nominal star and primary protagonist of the comic) entered into Castle Heterodyne three years ago, it may be understandable that some readers are getting antsy that nothing seems to be getting done; and the recent side-trip to Baron Wulfenbach telling a Storm King story had some readers grousing about another pointless subplot when the comic could be focusing on Agatha and her coterie.

This is not to say it wasn’t an inventive story, for it was. It even fit nicely into the Girl Genius mythos (and that of Agatha’s ancestors, who were not good and decent people on the whole). It would not be until the final panel of Monday’s update that the truth was unveiled… that the Baron has fallen under control of the clank (robotic) copy of the Other, who had devastated Europe before Agatha was born (and who was, in fact, Agatha’s mother). The story itself takes on new meaning. This isn’t a story about the Storm King. Instead, it is a warning… and instructions to his son Gil that he needs to be killed and how to do this.

Naturally the Baron’s fate is not set in stone. For one thing, he’s entirely too noble an antagonist to succumb to the Other’s control without a struggle; already we see he’s sending out warnings that something is awry. While he was infected with a Slaver Wasp and is now an unwilling slave of the Other, he’s not exactly helpless (even confined to a bed with an arm in a cast). He may be forced to obey the letter of the Other’s orders… but it seems he is still able to resist. In his own way he may be the comic’s greatest hero, and given the heroic nature at the heart of Girl Genius I have some hope that he won’t be killed (permanently, at least).

As far as side-stories go, this one is central to the plot as a whole. What’s more, we’re given another glimpse of Phil and Kaja Foglio’s skills as storytellers; the reveal of the clank-Other was presented at the perfect moment, while the segment itself disguised itself as “just” another side-plot until the very end. I must admit some curiosity as to what subtle elements are disguised within some of the other subplots, and what hidden connections they may have to the central plot.